A few days ago I sent you via e-mail the letter of application that you wrote with the errors underlined. The idea is that you find out what´s wrong with what you wrote, because a lot can be learned from one´s errors.
You can also benefit from looking at some of your classmates´mistakes, specially at the ones that keep showing up and are resistant to leave our written expression. So here you are a slide presentation with a few of those mistakes extracted from your letters. They are grammar or vocabulary errors. We´ll look at how to improve the content and format of the letters in class. I hope this will be useful. Let me know with a comment.